I am a Year 4 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 4 and my teacher is Ms Macfarlane.
Hi Taiala, I love the way you used metaphor in your story when you said I could hear the wind telling me to go for it. It really helped to create a picture in my head. Well done.
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Hi Taiala, I love the way you used metaphor in your story when you said I could hear the wind telling me to go for it. It really helped to create a picture in my head. Well done.
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