Hi guys this is my haunted ware story and I hope you like it.
The Haunted Warehouse.
One day in m.t wellington there was a haunted warehouse in sylvia park and if you go in there you will die and if you die you will be a ghost so never go in there.
So there was three kids there name was Constance,Taiala and Cerenity.When Constance ,went out to get themselves some shoes and clothes, when Constance went out to get some breeze no one noticed that the was a ghost inside her.
After Constance went inside something started to happen.It was the ghost coming out of her body,AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH everyone shouted,their is a ghost in the warehouse.
Next Taiala went to the haunted warehouse and seat up some Traps so we can get the warehouse back to normal.
while Taiala was setting up the traps,she saw a wizard that was coming to her.He was very nice and he said that he a good wizard,but Taiala didn’t
When Taiala setted up the traps the ghost started to die because the net had lots and lots of gas in it because they wanted to let the people who are doing shopping stay nice and carme.So they did stay carme and after shoping taiala went back to the haunted warehouse and she saw ghost in her trap and she shucked them in a nother haunted house and that is how the warehouse wasn’t haunted again.
THE END. BY TAIALA
1 comments:
Hi Taiala, this is an interesting story I like the part where you said 'constance went out to get some breeze'. I think next time you should read your story out loud to yourself and check it makes sense before you publish it.
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